tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3436391571362518738.post543027774660136757..comments2023-08-16T00:49:09.303-07:00Comments on Loving Without Limits: Chapter Two - Leap of FaithLexihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02627451119329330649noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3436391571362518738.post-54698362724976271262013-11-20T16:00:21.797-08:002013-11-20T16:00:21.797-08:00Enjoyed the 2 chapters so far, roll on Friday!Enjoyed the 2 chapters so far, roll on Friday!Suzehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15984860294524064795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3436391571362518738.post-83651772351984435172013-11-20T13:38:24.890-08:002013-11-20T13:38:24.890-08:00Oh! Not telling! I'm looking forward to see wh...Oh! Not telling! I'm looking forward to see what you think about Friday's ending. ^_^ Eight thousand words goes quick doesn't it?Lexihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02627451119329330649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3436391571362518738.post-21399972614782861832013-11-20T13:31:57.458-08:002013-11-20T13:31:57.458-08:00Don't I know it! When I subbed the story for t...Don't I know it! When I subbed the story for the anthology it had to be under 10k. This was my first short story and I will be the first to confess that I have a problems writing self-contained short stories. ^_^ I'm itching to fill in that year in between and add my ideas after the end. But with the word count so low, I concentrated on their relationship. The two of them falling in love quickly would not have worked in this scenario--hence the jump in time. Although.... going back and filling in that year will be fun. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)Lexihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02627451119329330649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3436391571362518738.post-29105380891112323982013-11-20T11:53:38.067-08:002013-11-20T11:53:38.067-08:00I read both chapters today and I'm enjoying th...I read both chapters today and I'm enjoying the story. I'm glad the feelings are not one-sided but I imagine we'll be seeing Javier again at some point. I hope that somebody gets a chance to flatten him like he deserves.<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04420776766875388389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3436391571362518738.post-38479433069413353332013-11-20T10:09:53.434-08:002013-11-20T10:09:53.434-08:00Quite the time-jump here, but I like it! Good Daws...Quite the time-jump here, but I like it! Good Dawson finally noticed Ben's feelings for him. ^_^Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05136381707969357824noreply@blogger.com